Journal: 09/01/13- Storyboard changes

Today I was going to begin editing the later part of the video that was shot before Christmas. However, when I tried to upload the videos onto the Mac's I discovered that there was an issue with the Mac's preventing me from converting the files on Streamclip. I also could not access Final Cut Pro or iMovieHD.

I have decided that I will now work out which sections of these performance elements will replace the original performance element on the story board.

Shot 45.                           Changed to
 Shot 54.                          Changed to

 Shot 55.                          Changed to
 Shot 61.                          Changed to
 Shot 62.                          Changed to

As previously stated, these shots have been changed to make the video flow better  as I was given the feedback that the original performance element was dragging on too much and I needed something else to make sure that it doesn't end up becoming predictable. Although I have shown 5 shots here, this could change when I get to the editing process.

Animatic Feedback

• Good generally-    Good 1st shot
• Few places where shot is held too long
• Add another location for performance shots 2/3 way through
• 'hand on tree' shot too long

I will be looking into ideas for the second performance element of the video. One idea would be to bring back the projection idea that was originally thought of when finding ideas for the performance elements within the video.

This second performance element could be brought in around 2:46 near the close of the song just after the artist has 'transformed' in the narrative piece.

The 'hand on tree shot will now be cut down from six seconds to two seconds and will feature one or two new shots from 1:28-1:32.