Elements that worked:
Diamond Logo/ Branding
Vision of video
Typography is effective
Overall themes and tone/mood are clear
Intertextual referencing
Iconography
Use of Prezi
Things that need developing:
Background story needs developing
Record Label Information
Industry connection
More explicit about intertextual reference
What kind of dress/time period?
Since the pitch I have looked further into location ideas and begun working on developing my narrative further to
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