Production Plan [to be completed]

Costume/props- to be completed before Christmas
Tuxedo- DONE
White dress (for narrative and main performance element)
Black dress (for second performance element)
Cat eyes- (for end of narrative [and possibly second performance element])

Black diamonds to hang from trees-

• Black paper 
• Black string/thread

Jars (at least 10 to be collected for performance element)
Tea lights (to go into jars)

Location shots- to be done 1st/2nd December (?)
Danson Park- Forest performance
Oxley Woods- Narrative
2nd performance location to be decided

2nd performance element ideas

• single candle providing the only light
• mirror (Aspect of looking [Andrew Goodwin])

Digipak/magazine advert photoshoot- To be completed before christmas (?)

Theme- Dark clothing. Dark, heavy make-up.

Animatic Feedback

• Good generally-    Good 1st shot
• Few places where shot is held too long
• Add another location for performance shots 2/3 way through
• 'hand on tree' shot too long

I will be looking into ideas for the second performance element of the video. One idea would be to bring back the projection idea that was originally thought of when finding ideas for the performance elements within the video.

This second performance element could be brought in around 2:46 near the close of the song just after the artist has 'transformed' in the narrative piece.

The 'hand on tree shot will now be cut down from six seconds to two seconds and will feature one or two new shots from 1:28-1:32.

Fragile Diamond- Video Pitch

 

 

Elements that worked:

Diamond Logo/ Branding

Vision of video

Typography is effective

Overall themes and tone/mood are clear

Intertextual referencing

Iconography

Use of Prezi

Things that need developing:

Background story needs developing

Record Label Information

Industry connection

More explicit about intertextual reference

What kind of dress/time period?

Since the pitch I have looked further into location ideas and begun working on developing my narrative further to 

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